Hmm, its interesting to note how much sex appeal plays in to the victim's actions, and that three human characters in a row have been completely willing to disregard the fact numerous people they knew end up having their skin pealed away, the guts burst open by the scaldingly hot liquids, and were left to drown amidst the puddle of gore, blood, and shit as the last of their air fades and the boiling waters spill the eyes from their skulls in a red tinted soup of what used to be their own bodies. Its a lot easier to accept them dying off to the main characters (villains? Its hard to tell at this point) when the entire criteria for concern among them is whether or not they personally will die. That if a mass murderer is nice to them, it doesn't matter how badly they treat everyone else they can take advantage of.

Really keen on seeing where Kaz ends up in all of this, and while I'll no doubt figure things out as I read along I suspect not one of the nameless deaths thus far is going to have an impact on the grander story. For the technical writing I can say that even as some of the oldest works you've managed its still well above average, and I'm glad to see its still up despite being out-dated.